tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post180922459808570110..comments2023-03-29T06:43:20.551-06:00Comments on A LEAPING ELEPHANT : BENEATH THE MIRRORED SURFACES.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-10169850208592648802013-03-01T22:14:47.432-07:002013-03-01T22:14:47.432-07:00...the inclusion of the idea about Atlantis makes ......the inclusion of the idea about Atlantis makes it more deep, mysterious & wonderful to read... enjoyed it...smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08116213800655914273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-9172236975568666412013-03-01T07:21:44.695-07:002013-03-01T07:21:44.695-07:00I love the idea of entering into the reflected tow...I love the idea of entering into the reflected town - that would be an interesting trip.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-31831317070264470892013-03-01T05:43:19.242-07:002013-03-01T05:43:19.242-07:00Thanks, Sharon... I came back to give it another t...Thanks, Sharon... I came back to give it another try with fresh eyes (it's morning). What a magical lake indeed... love the upside town.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-5168839595778416262013-03-01T03:16:21.572-07:002013-03-01T03:16:21.572-07:00Reads beautifully.
Yes, entering another world is ...Reads beautifully.<br />Yes, entering another world is always tempting, especially one you can simply glide into. As longs we have hope of getting back out. Mesmerizing poem. thank you.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-87796525509876791382013-03-01T00:20:17.286-07:002013-03-01T00:20:17.286-07:00But the enchantment is such you'll be glad you...But the enchantment is such you'll be glad you came - It was and i really enjoyed the poem.alan1704https://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-54933264128398195142013-02-28T22:05:07.214-07:002013-02-28T22:05:07.214-07:00nice...lakes are always magical and cool nod to at...nice...lakes are always magical and cool nod to atlantis as well.. had a hard time reading the font though..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-20670339614747261022013-02-28T21:46:31.070-07:002013-02-28T21:46:31.070-07:00The play with the mirror image on the lake, reflec...The play with the mirror image on the lake, reflecting the silhouette of the town above, is a wonderful device for this sonnet. You definitely challenged yourself with some of the end-rhymes you chose, but carried it off remarkably well.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-7435989344822308732013-02-28T19:20:30.432-07:002013-02-28T19:20:30.432-07:00I like the idea of an upside down town...a mirror ...I like the idea of an upside down town...a mirror image perhaps? Really enjoyed this...thanks.Bodhirosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12630769135515322096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-38100802004896825822013-02-28T19:13:51.972-07:002013-02-28T19:13:51.972-07:00a magical sonnet - loved the idea of Atlantis - l...a magical sonnet - loved the idea of Atlantis - lovely - KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-22063440462970240862013-02-28T16:29:06.442-07:002013-02-28T16:29:06.442-07:00Oh, how beautiful! Oh, how beautiful! Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-71533865601272433502013-02-28T15:35:28.625-07:002013-02-28T15:35:28.625-07:00I like the ending couplet, like Atlantis ~
Like L...I like the ending couplet, like Atlantis ~<br /><br />Like Laurie, I had a hard time reading the white font on the elephant background~ Perhaps a dark solid background will make it easier ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-68176161583322638262013-02-28T15:30:37.566-07:002013-02-28T15:30:37.566-07:00Sharon, I must be honest with you dear friend. I f...Sharon, I must be honest with you dear friend. I find it very difficult to read on this particular blog. The elephant background & white text hurts my eyes and makes me a bit dizzy (which happens easily w/ my Meniere's disease).Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-52047335365314158482013-02-28T15:29:51.704-07:002013-02-28T15:29:51.704-07:00Love the Atlantic take :-) great idea of mirrorsLove the Atlantic take :-) great idea of mirrorsbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-49882233098838725612013-02-28T15:21:26.564-07:002013-02-28T15:21:26.564-07:00ha. fun play with the reflection shot...in teh lak...ha. fun play with the reflection shot...in teh lake near here there is a town underwater....from the flooding and divers go down...never been but think it would be pretty cool...nice use of the form!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com