tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post6346415976737555969..comments2023-03-29T06:43:20.551-06:00Comments on A LEAPING ELEPHANT : Desperately Missing You Who are GoneS.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-84779483242882213172012-09-04T22:37:51.046-06:002012-09-04T22:37:51.046-06:00Many thanks to all who came, read and commented on...Many thanks to all who came, read and commented on this lamenting tritina ... I'm glad it was able to touch so many of youS.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-81079587694917812602012-09-01T09:03:57.343-06:002012-09-01T09:03:57.343-06:00Not only a fantastic tritina but a heart rendering...Not only a fantastic tritina but a heart rendering write! I feel you...for better or for worse...the longing is what lingers...awesomeness!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-68496729527193448332012-09-01T07:51:44.340-06:002012-09-01T07:51:44.340-06:00I love this, Sharon.I love this, Sharon.Sasha A. Palmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11930602874359925520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-27197360515035752572012-09-01T06:54:17.154-06:002012-09-01T06:54:17.154-06:00Very powerful tritina; I understand and empathize....Very powerful tritina; I understand and empathize. The last line really accentuates the sense of loss and mourning.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-40682351891212420982012-09-01T06:32:44.220-06:002012-09-01T06:32:44.220-06:00So sad, Sharon... beautifully written.So sad, Sharon... beautifully written.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-87450290977194869662012-09-01T02:57:22.949-06:002012-09-01T02:57:22.949-06:00such heavy emotions in this...missing someone so m...such heavy emotions in this...missing someone so much that we think we can't live on without them, hoping to find them somewhere on our journeys..a very moving writeClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-71893598675754687542012-08-31T23:06:37.003-06:002012-08-31T23:06:37.003-06:00With every verse that despondent feeling mounts an...With every verse that despondent feeling mounts and mounts, underlined by the word repetitions of the tritina. A compelling read.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-38289171884659893732012-08-31T21:58:27.125-06:002012-08-31T21:58:27.125-06:00Difficult, and the feeling of loss and mourning is...Difficult, and the feeling of loss and mourning is strong...the repetition echoes the drone of grief that repeats its sad lines over and over.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-33236172296954362572012-08-31T21:23:56.895-06:002012-08-31T21:23:56.895-06:00Ah - very sad and lyrical poem - the repetition of...Ah - very sad and lyrical poem - the repetition of the form is like knocking your head against a wall - more lyrical than that, but it adds to the poem's plaintive quality--so works terrifically well. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4897637389101917071.post-48272602574745962592012-08-31T21:20:25.683-06:002012-08-31T21:20:25.683-06:00whew...heavy feeling in that last line...built wel...whew...heavy feeling in that last line...built well with the image of someone walking through the graveyard at night looking for their dead love...whew...nicely done to form..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com